Question

VII.寫作：（共20分）
（1）基礎(chǔ)寫作：（共15分）
[寫作內(nèi)容]
　為豐富同學(xué)們的課間活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，最近你校試行音樂和點(diǎn)播歌曲活動(dòng)。對(duì)此，同學(xué)位看法不一。假如你是班長(zhǎng)李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)你的調(diào)查情況寫一個(gè)匯報(bào)，交給你們的校長(zhǎng)Smith先生。

贊成	反對(duì)
1.　放松神經(jīng)，減輕疲勞	1.　聲音嘈雜，影響休息
2.　帶來歡笑，是美的享受	2.　課間時(shí)間短，上課受影響

 
[寫作要求]
1.只能使用５個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容
2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)）。
參考詞匯：放松 relaxation (n.); 疲勞 tiredness (n.)
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
Dear Mr. Smith,
As a monitor, I think I should say something about the practice of playing music during the class break in our school. …
Truly yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version：
Dear Mr. Smith，
As a monitor ，I think I should say something about the practice of playing music during the class break in our school。
Some of us agree with the idea that music or songs should be played during the break ，because they think music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere and bring us relaxation，which reduces the tiredness of study 。besides ，listening to music makes us happy and is a great enjoyment。
However，some others hold a different opinion that music during the break will have a bad effect on their rest as it is too noisy 。what’s worse ，some students are still lost in the music they have heard during the short break ，which does harm to their studies。
Yours truly ，
Lihua

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