Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30 pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roommates until she "tracks me down".
As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can pick up my mother’s phone call, telling her a white lie that I’m already at home.
Recently I ran into a matchmaking meeting, which is held in a park and specifically designed for single white – collar workers in Beijing. The interesting part is that all of the attendees are single people’s parents, eager to look for a life partner for their children.
One mother told me that her 33-year-old son is busy with his career and has zero time to find a suitable girl for himself. So she goes to the matchmaking every week, trying to find her son a perfect bride.
She guaranteed that her future daughter-in-law doesn’t need to worry about anything for she has prepared an apartment and a car for them, and if they can’t find a kindergarten near the apartment she has bought, she will buy them another one. Looking at hundreds of middle – aged parents standing in the cold outdoors in a freezing winter trying to build their children a perfect future, I suddenly understand my mother more.
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括這段短文的內(nèi)容；
2．然后以約120個(gè)詞就“父母的過(guò)分關(guān)愛(ài)”進(jìn)行議論，內(nèi)容包括；
（1）請(qǐng)舉一個(gè)你或你周圍的周學(xué)得到父母的過(guò)分關(guān)愛(ài)的事例；
（2）談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法。
【寫(xiě)作要求】
1．在作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫。

Answer 1

The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.
What my mother does drives me crazy. She calls me at 10:30pm every night to make sure I’ve arrived home safely. If I accidentally miss her call, she will keep calling all my friends and roomates until she "tracks me down".
As a 20-year-old lady in Beijing, sometimes I have to ask my friends to be quiet so that I can I can pick up my mother’s phone call, telling her a white lie that I’m already at home.
The author, a 20-year-old lady, took her own experience as an example to show that today too much care is paid to the Chinese children by their parents, even when they have already grown up.

這篇作文分兩部分，第一部分用30個(gè)字概括文章，要求學(xué)生有很強(qiáng)的概括能力，還要表達(dá)出文章的主題來(lái)。語(yǔ)言精當(dāng)條理清楚。第二部分是議論“父母的過(guò)分關(guān)愛(ài)”的問(wèn)題，要點(diǎn)包括；一個(gè)你或你周圍的周學(xué)得到父母的過(guò)分關(guān)愛(ài)的事例；并談?wù)勀銓?duì)此事的看法。說(shuō)明文章可以分兩部分，一是用過(guò)去時(shí)表述一件相關(guān)的事，再就此事發(fā)表自己的看法，應(yīng)該是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，句意使用高級(jí)句型和短語(yǔ)，文章連貫問(wèn)題。