Question

假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)撰寫(xiě)一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
目前汽車帶來(lái)的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問(wèn)題；
騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。
參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）;節(jié)能（energy saving）
注意1. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右；
演講稿開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Good morning, everyone.
I’m Li Hua from Yucai Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”…                                                                                                                                                                         
                                                                          

Answer 1

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Possible version:
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!

解析試題分析：這是一篇演講稿，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目。假設(shè)你是育才中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)撰寫(xiě)一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：目前汽車帶來(lái)的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問(wèn)題；騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容、開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，但是寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來(lái)更充實(shí)，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意題目要求120詞左右，寫(xiě)的字?jǐn)?shù)不要太多，也不能太少。
考點(diǎn)：演講稿作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于演講稿作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。