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你的澳大利亞筆友Tom發(fā)來電子郵件，向你詢問國(guó)家體育館“鳥巢”的有關(guān)信息。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示給Tom回一封電子郵件，簡(jiǎn)單介紹“鳥巢”。

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	地  點(diǎn)	北京北部
	建筑面積	5.8萬平方米，可容納9萬多名觀眾
	開工/竣工時(shí)間	2003年12月－2007年
	外  觀	猶如用樹枝搭成的“鳥巢”
	用  途	奧運(yùn)會(huì)期間可舉辦田徑、足球比賽
		奧運(yùn)會(huì)后將用于各類大型活動(dòng)
	Kofi Annan(安南)的評(píng)價(jià)	“鳥巢”將成為奧運(yùn)歷史上一個(gè)建筑奇觀

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3. 參考詞匯：田徑: track and field events    觀眾: spectators   建筑: architecture

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Dear Tom,

In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium — the Bird’s Nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

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I hope that my introduction will satisfy you.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

    In your last e-mail, you showed a great interest in our National Stadium —the Bird’s Nest. Now I’d like to introduce it to you.

       The Bird’s Nest, which looks just like a bird’s nest made of tree branches, is located in the north of Beijing. It can hold about 90,000 spectators, covering an area of 58,000 square meters. The construction on it was started in December, 2003 and was completed in 2007. The Bird’s Nest, where the track and field events as well as soccer matches were held will be used for many other large events.

  Kofi Annan, former secretary of the UN, gave the thumbs-up to its design and said that it would be a wonder in architecture in the history of the global Games.

I hope that my introduction will satisfy you.

Yours faithfully,

 Li Ming

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