Question

假設(shè)你住在一個涉外小區(qū)，社區(qū)委員會請你幫忙用英文寫一封電子郵件，將周末農(nóng)家采摘活動的安排傳達(dá)給住戶。要點：
1.時間：下周六上午8:00至11:00   2.內(nèi)容：采摘蘋果
3.報名：辦公室，周四下午5:00前  4. 提示：帶帽子、手套
5.歡迎踴躍參加
注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3.開頭結(jié)尾已為你寫好；
4.參考詞匯：社區(qū)community 委員會 committee  居民resident 
Our dear residents,
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The committee of the community        

Answer 1

Our dear residents,
In order to enrich the life of the residents, the committee of our community has arranged a special activity for next weekend.
We plan to go to a farm to pick apples from 8 to 11 next Saturday morning. All the residents in the community can join. Those who are interested in the activity have to sign up in the office before 5p.m.next Thursday.
In addition, while working there, you’d better wear a hat and gloves to protect your face from being exposed to the strong sunlight and your hands from hurting.
Welcome to take an active part in the activity. Wish you a wonderful time!
The committee of the community

解析1.認(rèn)真審題，確定體裁
電子郵件應(yīng)屬于書信類作文。它要求開始寫稱謂(The Salutation or Greeting)，如Dear Sir，Gentlemen，Dear Mr (Mrs，Miss) Smith等；接著是正文(The Body)部分。如果你是主動寫電子郵件給別人，首先就要表明你的意圖，如“I am writing to you for ...”；“I’m writing in reference to ...”；正文最后還要寫上感謝收信人的禮貌語，如“Thank you for your consideration.”及“I look forward to hearing from you.”；其次是結(jié)束語(The complimentary close)，如Yours trully，Yours respectfully，Yours sincerely，Yours faithfully等；最后是簽名(The signature)，附上你的名字。根據(jù)本題要求，電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，學(xué)生只需寫好正文部分，可以說降低了難度，避免了考生因格式不對而造成失分。 
2.人稱時態(tài)，心中有數(shù)
由于本文是講述互動安排，所以應(yīng)以第一人稱和一般將來時態(tài)為主。
3.理順要點，潤色詞句
理順要點，防止漏寫、亂寫以保證內(nèi)容的完整性，然后將理順的要點用自己有把握的短語或句型將意思完整地表達(dá)出來。注意語言表達(dá)的多樣性，既要使用簡單句，也要使用結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜的復(fù)合句、并列句；措詞要講究，既要會使用普通詞語，也要能使用高級詞匯。
4.有效銜接，串句成篇
正確地選用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，如first，then，after等，使文章過渡自然，和諧統(tǒng)一，增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性、流暢性和可讀性。