Question

假如你是李華，請(qǐng)給你的美國(guó)筆友JIm寫(xiě)一封e-mail，介紹你的英語(yǔ)老師Mr.Wang

要點(diǎn)：1.他40歲，中等個(gè)頭；

2.性格外向，與學(xué)生相處得很好；

3.他的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)很流利，課后常幫我們學(xué)英語(yǔ)；

4.不抽煙，非常喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)，擅長(zhǎng)打籃球  

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Jim,

Hi.How is everything going with you lately? I am writing to tell you something about my English teache Mr.Wang. Mr.Wang is forty years old. He is neither tall nor short. He is outgoing and gets on well with us students. His spoken English is very good(He can speak English fluently). He often helps us with our English after class. He likes sports and is good at playing basketball. He doesn't smoke. We all love him.

Best wishes to you

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】本文是以書(shū)信的方式介紹一個(gè)人。應(yīng)是與朋友寫(xiě)信，故開(kāi)頭開(kāi)先寫(xiě)幾句問(wèn)候語(yǔ)，然后切入文章主題，介紹老師。文本必須覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)，自己還可以適當(dāng)增加要點(diǎn)。時(shí)態(tài)均采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。描述完他的情況后，可適當(dāng)增加我對(duì)他的評(píng)價(jià)。 文章結(jié)尾也應(yīng)注意書(shū)信的格式。