Question

近來(lái)我國(guó)多地霧霾天氣不斷增多，極大地影響了人們的健康與生活。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章，向某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社投稿。

提示：1. 實(shí)況描述

2. 對(duì)生活造成的影響

3. 分析霧霾形成的原因

4. 提出治理污染的建議。

注意：1. 上下文連貫，行文流暢。

2. 詞數(shù)100-120 (首句已給出，并不計(jì)入詞數(shù))。

霧霾天氣the hazy weather 口罩 mask

Dear Editor,

Recently many places in China were blanketed with thick fog.____________________________

 

 

 

 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

Recently many places in China were blanketed with thick fog. Everything around disappeared from our sight. Some highways were closed. More traffic jams and accidents happened .People had to wear masks .What’s worse, many people found it difficult to breathe.　

The heavy hazy weather in China has been caused by many factors. First, the severely polluted environment contributed a lot to this nightmare. Second , the increase of cars in the city area plays an important role . The cars send off a lot of poisonous gases . In my opinion , we should call on people to use more public transport, thus reducing the number of cars in the streets . Besides , some factories which cause pollution should be closed down . What’s more , we have to do more to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection .Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days .

Best regards,

　　 Yours，

LiHua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達(dá)這些要點(diǎn)以外，還要給出自己的建議，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，運(yùn)用了一些詞組：contributed a lot to有助于，plays an important role起著重要的作用，send off排放，In my opinion在我看來(lái)，call on號(hào)召。范文中的句式多變，運(yùn)用不同的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)： many people found it difficult to breathe.這句話(huà)用了固定句型， some factories which cause pollution should be closed down . 這句話(huà)用了定語(yǔ)從句，.Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days . 這句話(huà)用了倒裝句。還有范文用了What’s worse, First, Second , Besides ,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)書(shū)面表達(dá)