Question

【題目】假如你叫Tom，寒假期間你要去英國(guó)Midwood High School進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)。以下是英方學(xué)校寄給你的課程安排選擇表。請(qǐng)你仔細(xì)閱讀課表，按要求給校方回復(fù)一封信。

Schedule for Summer English Courses
English Courses	Total Hours of Study	Total Hours of Part-time Job	Date
Three-week course	120	48	Feb. 1 — Feb. 24
Two-week course	60	No Job but Tour Instead	Feb. 25 — Mar.7

Please include the following:

1. Your choice of the courses and possible reasons

2. Your present English level

3. Specific language skill you hope to improve

4. Other requirements

【注意事項(xiàng)】

1．開頭已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2．作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

2. 詞數(shù)：150左右

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for your inviting me to the summer English course in your school.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

Thank you for your inviting me to the winter English course in your school. As for my choice between the two courses, I’m more likely to choose the two-week course for 60 hours of study. This will allow me more time to see your beautiful country while learning the language. I would like to do some traveling and make a few new friends.

Of all the subjects I’m learning at school, I like English best. I have been learning English for 6 years and now I am able to listen, speak, read and write in English. I hope to take this chance to improve my spoken English as much as possible. At the same time, I’d like to have home-stay for a couple of days so that I can know better about English habits and customs. I believe I will have a wonderful time in England this winter.

Best wishes.

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信。寒假期間你要去英國(guó)Midwood High School進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)。根據(jù)英方學(xué)校寄給你的課程安排選擇表，給校方回復(fù)一封信。認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)。寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一篇書信，格式正確，要點(diǎn)包括齊全，文章結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)句子。This will allow me more time to see your beautiful country while learning the language.動(dòng)詞不定式和現(xiàn)在分詞用在句中；Of all the subjects I’m learning at school, 運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句；I have been learning English for 6 years句中使用現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)；I hope to take this chance to improve my spoken English as much as possible.動(dòng)詞不定式在句中做賓語(yǔ)和后置定語(yǔ)；I’d like to have home-stay for a couple of days so that I can know better about English habits and customs.so that引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)從句；I believe I will have a wonderful time in England this winter.省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句；另外，As for，as much as possible，At the same time,等的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。