Question

假設(shè)你叫王華，你的一位英國朋友Jack從英國給你寄來一件印有哈利·波特（Harry Potter）形象的T恤衫，并附有一封信。在信中他向你問好，他想知道你的近況。請你給他寫一封回信表示感謝�；匦乓�包括以下內(nèi)容：
1. 感謝他送你的禮物。你非常喜歡，因為哈利·波特是你最喜歡的電影主角。
2. 告訴他你在新的學校一切都好，只是這里的英語老師課堂上英語說的很多，你很難聽懂老師說的每一個單詞。
3. 因為他是姚明的球迷，你將為他寄去一件印有姚明形象的T恤衫。
4. 詢問他的近況，并希望他能來中國。
注意：1. 書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2. 詞數(shù)100個詞左右。
Dear Jack,
I’m very happy to hear from you again.                                 
                                                                            
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely
Wang Hua

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
I’m very happy to hear from you again. Thank you for the T-shirt with Harry Potter on it and I like it very much. As you know, Harry Potter is my favourite film hero. Every time I wear it, I will think of you.
I’m fine here in the new school and everything goes well. The only problem is that my English teacher speaks more English and I find it hard to follow her.
In return for your gift, I will send you a T-shirt with Yao Ming on it because I know you are a fan of him.
How are you doing in England? And I hope you can pay a visit to China some day.
I’m looking forward to your reply.

解析試題分析：
這是封感謝信。 其常用的格式如下：
Dear ______ ,
①I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for ______（感謝的原因）. ②If it had not been for your assistance in ______（對方給予的具體幫助）, I fear that I would have been ______（沒有對方幫助時的后果）.
　�、跡very one agrees that it was you who ______（給出細節(jié)）.
　　④Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you! Please accept my gratitude.
　　                                  Yours sincerely,
　                                       ⅹⅹⅹ
Yours sincerely
Wang Hua
在寫信件之類的應用文的時候，除了注意文章的格式之外，還要注意不要遺漏文章的要點，因為要點也是閱卷老師特別關(guān)注的地方。同樣也要注意使用合適的連接詞讓各要點成為一個整體，注意使用高級的詞匯如：look forward to…,in return for…等。
考點：考查提綱作文
點評：提綱作文的關(guān)鍵是不要遺漏文章的要點，要注意格式，在寫作的時候為提示檔次要使用連接詞和高級詞匯。