Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你們學(xué)校將對“良好飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。請根據(jù)下列提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容要點應(yīng)包括：

部分同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣	良好的飲食習(xí)慣	個人看法
不吃早餐愛吃零食偏食飲食過量	飲食多樣化飲食定時定量	重要性：有助于身體健康……

注意：1. 發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，可根椐內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫，符合邏輯。

2．發(fā)言稿開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；

3．詞數(shù)：100左右。

4．參考詞匯：偏食be particular about food    零食 snack

Dear friends，

As we all know, we are what we eat. __________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear friends，

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast；some like to have snacks; some others are particular about food；and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health.

To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as main food. Besides, we’d better have meals regularly.

In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是一篇議論文方面的寫作，議論性作文的結(jié)構(gòu)：1. 開門見山地點明所要闡述的內(nèi)容。2. 分析不同的觀點：可采用分類式或?qū)Ρ仁�，并闡明理由。要注意層次清楚條理清晰。3. 歸納總結(jié)或發(fā)表評論�？忌�在寫作之前必修認(rèn)真審題，首先要注意文章的時態(tài)。不能根據(jù)材料逐字逐句的翻譯應(yīng)該注意句子的銜接，以提高作文的檔次。

【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如as we all know，it’s very important for sb. to do，be particular about，do harm to, keep fit，in one’s opinion，build up；還運用句型which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，only放句首引導(dǎo)的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)等等。并注意了句子的銜接如：therefore，however，besides, 等等。

考點：議論文寫作