Question

假如你是紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李明，根據(jù)學(xué)校安排，你給即將到你校任教的外籍教師Jack推薦一名學(xué)生助手（assistant）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給提示給Jack寫(xiě)封推薦信。

1. 歡迎Jack的到來(lái)；

2. 推薦劉佳做學(xué)生助手；

3. 劉佳的基本情況（18歲，高三學(xué)生，學(xué)校十佳學(xué)生）；

4. 劉佳的特點(diǎn)與特長(zhǎng)（活潑、樂(lè)觀；電腦技能；溝通能力；英語(yǔ)水平等）。

注意：詞數(shù)：120~150；可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

                                                                                 

                                                                                 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Jack,

I’m Li Ming, Chairman of the students’ Union of Hongxing Middle School. It’s great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.

I was asked to write to you to recommend Liu Jia, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant. Liu Jia is a friendly, active and optimistic girl. She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. What’s more, she is one of the top ten students in our school, and her spoken English is extremely excellent. I’m sure she can be helpful in your work and life in China.

If you have any questions about it, please contact me.

I’m looking forward to your coming.

                                                Yours，

                                                Li Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本文是書(shū)信類作文，要求根據(jù)所給提示給Jack寫(xiě)封推薦信，文章的要點(diǎn)也基本上都給出來(lái)了，而且很具體，考生要把要點(diǎn)解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中，要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型，如強(qiáng)調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時(shí)在列舉措施的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來(lái)很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要啰嗦，力求簡(jiǎn)潔。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，應(yīng)用了一些較好的詞組和句子：look forward to盼望，have a gift for有…天賦， It’s great to hear that you are going to teach in our school next semester/term.這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， She is also a smart girl who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for communicating with others. 這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句，還有文章還使用了What’s more, 這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使文章更加連貫。

考點(diǎn)：考查書(shū)信類書(shū)面表達(dá)