Question

短文寫作（共一題，滿分25分）
假設(shè)你叫李明，下面是你的一位外國筆友Kristie給你寫的電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)小悅悅事件的情況。
Dear Li Ming,
I learned from a news flash that a two-year-old baby girl was ignored by more than a dozen passers-by after being run over twice in a south China town．I’m very shocked．I used to think the Chinese were hardworking and kindhearted, and they really were when I was on a visit in China two years ago．So I doubt whether it was true news．Can you tell me what you learned about this incident?
Sincerely yours,
Kristie
請你給她回一封郵件，要點如下：
1．社會陷入自責(zé)和反思；
2．某些路人的冷漠或另有原因，可最終還是有一名拾荒婆婆挺身而出；
3．單個事件不能代表中國，助人為樂一直是中國傳統(tǒng)美德。
注意：
1．不能照抄原信件語句；
2．可自由發(fā)揮添加細(xì)節(jié)；
3．詞數(shù)120左右；
4．回信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。
參考詞匯：倫理道德- ethical and moral （adj．）; 美德- virtue （n．）
Dear Kristie,
I was in very low spirits                                                               
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
Believe me, Kristie, and believe in the Chinese people!
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Kristie,
I was in very low spirits when hearing this shocking news, and so was the whole nation．All the people have been undertaking a thoughtful review of the ethical and moral challenges we are faced with．
While we blame those hardhearted passers-by, there might be deep reasons behind the scenes．For various reasons there is a growing tendency for people to keep away from being involved in such accidents．However, on no account shall we tolerate this heartless behavior．
Luckily in the story you mentioned, an old lady, who earned her life by collecting rubbish, came to the little girl’s aid and helped rush her to hospital．So we have every reason to believe that the Chinese traditional virtues of being ready to help others will remain forever．
Believe me, Kristie, and believe in the Chinese people!
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming

本文是一篇給材料作文，或者說半開放作文，寫一封回信，你就有關(guān)小悅悅事件，向外國筆友Kristie寫一份電子郵件，要點已經(jīng)給出社會陷入自責(zé)和反思2．某些路人的冷漠或另有原因，可最終還是有一名拾荒婆婆挺身而出； 3．單個事件不能代表中國，助人為樂一直是中國傳統(tǒng)美德。在行文中，我們可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。范文中就使用了合理的連詞和較高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增色不少。
【寫作亮點】：句子：While we blame those hardhearted passers-by, there might be deep reasons behind the scenes和on no account shall we tolerate this heartless behavior．
。同時文章中使用了適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)連詞，比如    However,Luckily，So,等，使用文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，渾然一體。