Question

假設(shè)你應(yīng)邀參加學(xué)校組織的“英語學(xué)習(xí)師生座談會(huì)”，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的信息，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，簡(jiǎn)單介紹自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況，并對(duì)學(xué)校今后的英語教學(xué)提出建議。

自己英語學(xué)習(xí)的情況	1.英語學(xué)習(xí)的目的
2.英語學(xué)習(xí)的方法
3.課外自學(xué)的途徑
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對(duì)學(xué)校英語教學(xué)的建議	（請(qǐng)考生根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)歷與感想，提出兩至三點(diǎn)建議）。

注意：

1.對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2.詞數(shù)120左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

 Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my  experience of learning English with you.                         _________________ ____________________

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Thank you for listening.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear teacher and schoolmates ,It’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you . I’m interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future .Naturally ,It is very important for me to learn English well .As everybody knows , vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building . I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible .After class , I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio .Besides , I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.

Now , I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school .Firstly ,we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it .Secondly ,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them .Finally , I suggest we have more English activities , such as English contests and festivals.

Thank you for listening .

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求根據(jù)圖表提示信息寫一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹自己的英語學(xué)習(xí)情況并且對(duì)學(xué)校今后的教學(xué)提出意見建議。首先我們要分析圖表得出準(zhǔn)確信息以合理安排篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。就此篇文章而言，因?yàn)橐�求是兩部分所以在段落安排上可以采用兩段式分別介紹。而且圖表提示信息較為簡(jiǎn)單，所以在內(nèi)容上要適當(dāng)加以發(fā)揮補(bǔ)充，以使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，上下文連貫。此外在寫作時(shí)還要注意連接詞的恰當(dāng)使用以使文章條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】在本文中作者采用兩段式，分別介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)情況和提出意見建議，并且在文中使用了firstly、secondly、thirdly等副詞來陳述自己的建議，這樣使文章結(jié)構(gòu)和條理都異常清晰。在語言運(yùn)用上，長(zhǎng)短句的結(jié)合、短語like bricks in a building 的形象比喻使得文章內(nèi)容更加生動(dòng)。此外besides，naturally等副詞也使文章上下文銜接緊湊，語意連貫。

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