Question

假設(shè)你班要出一期關(guān)于“A Great Man”的英語墻報，請根據(jù)以下提示用英語寫一篇關(guān)于“Nelson Mandela”的短文，刊登在此墻報上。

簡介	1918年出生在南非；1943年加入ANC，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)黑人進(jìn)行爭取平等和自由的反種族歧視斗爭；曾蹲監(jiān)獄27年；1993年獲諾貝爾和平獎；1994年被選為第一位黑人總統(tǒng)；2013年因癌癥去世。
個人評價	......

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詞數(shù)：120左右。

參考詞匯：anti-racial discrimination 反種族歧視

Nelson Mandela

Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black people.

 

 

Answer 1

Nelson Mandela

Mandela will be well remembered as a freedom fighter for the black people. He was born in South Africa in 1918 and joined the ANC in 1943. He led the black people in the campaign of the anti-racial discrimination for freedom and equality. As a result, he was in prison for 27 years. In 1993, he won the Nobel Peace Prize for his contribution. Highly respected by his people, he was elected the first black president of South Africa. Unfortunately, our beloved leader died of cancer in 2013.

For all his life, Nelson Mandela had striven for the liberation of African nations. He, who played an important role in the anti-racial discrimination struggle in South Africa, made great contributions to the development of Chian-South Africa relations. Although the great man has left, Mandela’s thought and his spirit will live forever.

He is the pride of the African people as well as the world.

【解析】

試題分析：本書面表達(dá)是一篇人物介紹類寫作。在寫作中注意人稱與謂語動詞的數(shù)關(guān)系和動詞時態(tài)等諸多方面。對于中學(xué)作文的寫作，盡量將所學(xué)的知識運(yùn)用到作文中，寫出富于變化、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊的文章，不要出現(xiàn)中式英文。在平時的練習(xí)中，注意多背誦范文，對于寫的好的句子進(jìn)行默寫，考試時就能寫出準(zhǔn)確地道的作文。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如in prison，die of，play an important role in，make great contributions to, as well as；還運(yùn)用句型who引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句。并注意了句子的銜接如：As a result，Although，and 等等。

考點(diǎn)：人物介紹類寫作