假設(shè)你是李華，2008年11月21日你觀看了周華健Emil Chau的個(gè)人演唱會，這是你平生

第一次親臨現(xiàn)場，它給你留下了深刻的印象。請你根據(jù)下面提供的信息，給你的外國朋友

Jim寫一封信，簡要介紹臺灣歌手周華健并描述你的難忘經(jīng)歷和感受。

要求：　1. 文章要包括全部信息　2．可以適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容使文章連貫，

3 文章的開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)總詞數(shù)，字?jǐn)?shù)120詞左右

4．參考詞匯：國內(nèi)外：home and abroad 氣氛: atmosphere 專輯album

基本信息：

★ 1960年12月出生在香港；從小有音樂天賦；

★ 1984年出第一張專輯，在后來的二十幾年的歌壇生涯中，出版許多專輯并在國內(nèi)外舉辦多場演唱會。“朋友”是他最受歡迎的歌曲之一。

演唱會情況：

★ 2008年11月21日，首都體育館 the Capital Stadium

★ 座無虛席；觀眾齊唱；整場氣氛熱烈

個(gè)人感受： 自擬

 

Dear Jim,

How are things going?

On November 21st, 2008 I went to a concert held in the Capital Stadium. The concert was given by Emil Chau, a singer from Taiwan. Chau was born in Hongkong in December, 1960 and showed his music talent at an early age. His first album came out in 1984. Since then he has made many albums and has continued giving great performances on stage at home and abroad. His song “Friend” became well-known to each household.

Throughout the concert, there was not an empty seat anywhere in the Stadium, and the atmosphere was extremely exciting. The audience sang along to nearly every song.

I was greatly impressed by Chau’s brilliant music and singing. While I watched and listened, I knew that I was seeing the performance of a real superstar. This s the best concert that I will remember forever.

【解析】考察提綱類短文

試題分析：

本文屬于提綱類短文，敘述作者在2008年11月21日觀看了周華健Emil Chau的個(gè)人演唱會。屬于記敘文，要使用第一人稱和過去時(shí)。

要點(diǎn)：1. 2008年11月21日你觀看了周華健Emil Chau的個(gè)人演唱會，這是你平生第一次親臨現(xiàn)場，它給你留下了深刻的印象。2. 1960年12月出生在香港；從小有音樂天賦；3.1984年出第一張專輯，在后來的二十幾年的歌壇生涯中，出版許多專輯并在國內(nèi)外舉辦多場演唱會。“朋友”是他最受歡迎的歌曲之一。4. 2008年11月21日，首都體育館 the Capital Stadium

座無虛席；觀眾齊唱；整場氣氛熱烈；5.個(gè)人感受：對于這次演唱會感覺很好，留下了深刻的印象。

提綱類作文要根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點(diǎn)，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌仨氄J(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】：本文最大的特點(diǎn)在于要點(diǎn)的安排，整個(gè)文章分為了4段。第一段是書信的基本格式，從第二段開始是對周華健個(gè)人情況的介紹，按照時(shí)間順序來安排要點(diǎn)。第三段結(jié)束演唱會的情況，最后一段介紹個(gè)人感受。整個(gè)文章顯得很緊湊。

考點(diǎn)：考察提綱類作文

 

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