Question

【題目】假定你是李華，21st Century舉辦了一個主題為“關(guān)愛殘疾人”的英文征文活動，請你以Lending a helping hand為題寫一篇演講稿，表達你對于殘疾人現(xiàn)狀的看法，并提出如何關(guān)愛殘疾人的建議。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 文章開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear friends,

It’s my honor to be here to share my opinion on how to help disabled people.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

It’s my honor to be hare to share my opinion on how to help disabled people.

Although medical science is well developed nowadays, there are still many people with disabilities living around us. Their disabilities make them live a hard life. In general, they are still a disadvantaged social group, who suffer discriminations in work, education, transportation, etc. To some extent, disability is often defined as something tragic. However, disabled people are an important part in our society, so it’s our duty to lend a helping hand to them.

First of all, we should pass major legislation recognizing people with disabilities as a protected class to ensure their rights in place. Additionally, we should make public places readily accessible to disabled people to guarantee that they can fully integrate into our social life. Last but not least, we should foster public awareness to show respect and consideration for the disabled.

In brief, society needs to make combined efforts to help disabled people live their lives to the fullest within the “abled-bodied” world. Your small step towards this target can really make a big difference!

【解析】本文是一篇演講式作文。屬于提綱式作文。本文就以Lending a helping hand為題寫一篇演講稿，表達你對于殘疾人現(xiàn)狀的看法，并提出如何關(guān)愛殘疾人的建議。因此首先要確定要介紹的主題和目的。語言形式一般來說比較簡單，較少采用復(fù)雜的句式，可使用長短句，有張有弛，富有節(jié)奏感。接著確定你的看法及其表述邏輯順序。

亮點分析：本文中運用了許多的較高級的詞匯如“In general, To some extent，be accessible to, show respect and consideration for, in brie, last but not least, make combined efforts to, foster public awareness to ,to the fullest within the “abled-bodied”, lend a helping hand to, make a big difference“，給文章增添了色彩。!運用的表示順序連詞“ First of all,.. Additionally,…Last but not least,”使文章前后相連，一氣呵成。文章中主動語態(tài)和被動語態(tài)互用。句式靈活多樣，既有各種復(fù)句，又有單句，非謂語形式。而復(fù)句中既有名詞從句，又有狀語從句和定語從句，有張有弛，富有節(jié)奏感，而這給文章增分不少。句式變化如下：

常用句式：It’s an honor to do…和It’s my honor to be do…

狀語從句：Although medical science is well developed nowadays, there are still many people with disabilities living around us.

However, disabled people are an important part in our society, so it’s our duty to lend a helping hand to them.

定語從句：. they are still a disadvantaged social group, who suffer discriminations in work

名詞從句：…guarantee that they can fully integrate into our social life.

非謂語動詞：…pass major legislation recognizing people with disabilities