Question

Dear Jenny,

I’m so worried when I see that you’re not a little tired and nervous about the coming College Entrance Examination; Here is some advices to help you prepare the coming exam.

Have enough sleep, whatever much work you have to do，or you’ll feel sleepy on an

occasion in class. A balanced diet will certainly help a lot. Having more fresh fruit and

vegetables every day are good for you. Which you know, a proper method of learning will

enable you to learn more and faster. To get better results, that is wise to be attentive and make

every effort to gain knowledge. And you were supposed to review your notes taking down after

class every day. Always remember to stay happily and optimistic so that you can be energetic

while doing the revision. I hope you’ll no longer feel tired and nervous.

Best wishes.

Yours,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 advices→advice

 prepare后加for

 whatever→however

 刪去an

 are→is

 which→as

 that →it

 were→are

 taking→taken

 happily→happy

【解析】

試題分析：本文寫(xiě)的是因?yàn)镴enny在大學(xué)入學(xué)考試前非常緊張，作者給出的幾條建議。

 因?yàn)閍dvice 建議是不可數(shù)名詞，所以沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式，所以去掉s.

 固定短語(yǔ)prepare for 為。。。。。。做準(zhǔn)備，所以加for.

 固定用法：however +many + 復(fù)數(shù)名詞/however + much  + 不可數(shù)名詞+ 主語(yǔ) + 謂語(yǔ)，無(wú)論多少…… ,所以把whatever 改成however.

 固定短語(yǔ):on occasion 有時(shí)候，所以去掉an.

 因?yàn)榫渥又髡Z(yǔ)Having more fresh fruit and vegetables是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單數(shù)，所以are改成is。

 詞句是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句不能位于句首，所以改成as.

 本句真正主語(yǔ)是to be attentive and make every effort to gain knowledge，應(yīng)該由it做形式主語(yǔ)代替真正主語(yǔ)不定式短語(yǔ)，所以that改成it。

 此處是時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤，整個(gè)短文都是現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，本句也不表過(guò)去情況，所以were改成are。

 非謂語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤。notes 和take 之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系做筆記倒過(guò)來(lái)筆記被做，所以改成taken,

 副詞錯(cuò)誤。此句中stay 是系動(dòng)詞后面應(yīng)該跟形容詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu)即保持快樂(lè)和樂(lè)觀，所以happily 改成happy.

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。