假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(A ) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

  It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas,but he rode it every day. One morning,he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard,he saw a man loading it into his car. He shouted,but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian,he told his dad he real forgave the thief. What’s more,he wanted the thief know he was forgiven. So the next day,he posted the message on a poster-board and put it in the front yard. “To the person who stole my bike： You hurt my feeling. But I am a Christian and I forgive him!”When he left for home the next morning,at the end of the driveway,the bike was back with new brakes.

 It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas,but that and he rode it every day. One morning,he suddenly found the bike gone. Ran to his front yard,he saw a man loading it into his Running car. He shouted,but the man drive off. As a devoted Christian,

drove he told his dad he real forgave the thief. What's more,he wan-really ted the thief A know he was forgiven. So the next day,he posted to the message on a poster-board and put it in the front yard. "To the person who stole my bike: You hurt my feeling. But I am a feelings Christian and I forgive him！" When he left ^fei;home the next you morning,at the end of the driveway,the bike was back with new brakes.

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