Question

通過在班級(jí)內(nèi)進(jìn)行調(diào)查，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)很多同學(xué)在生活和飲食方面都存在一些影響健康的習(xí)慣，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提示以Form a Good Living Habit為題寫一篇短文。
現(xiàn)象：一些同學(xué)不吃早飯，課間吃一些零食(snacks)充饑；不喜歡吃蔬菜而喜歡吃一些高熱量的食物，平常也缺乏鍛煉。
結(jié)果：有些同學(xué)體重開始增加，不時(shí)出現(xiàn)一些健康問題。
建議：要養(yǎng)成有規(guī)律的生活習(xí)慣，按時(shí)吃早飯，多吃些健康食品，并加強(qiáng)鍛煉。
說明：1、文章開頭已給出，不記入總詞數(shù)。
2、100字左右。
Form a Good Living Habit
Through the survey we find that                                              
                                                                             
                                                                              

Answer 1

Form a Good Living Habit
Through the survey we find that many students have some bad habits in life and diet. For example, some students don’t eat breakfast . When they feel hungry, they eat some snacks between classes. And also some others don’t like to eat vegetables but enjoy eating the kind of food rich in calories. What’s worse they did not do enough exercise. As a result many of them begin to gain weight and often have some health problems.
In order to keep healthy, therefore, we should realize the importance of healthy diet and try to develop good living habits. It will benefit us to eat breakfast on time and have more healthy food. Besides, we should also take more exercise.

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