Question

你校正在開(kāi)展創(chuàng)建和諧校園系列活動(dòng)，其中包括“做文明學(xué)生，創(chuàng)和諧校園”英語(yǔ)演講比賽，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)準(zhǔn)備一篇演講稿，參加該活動(dòng)。

1．文明行為使校園和諧，也是學(xué)生高素質(zhì)的體現(xiàn) 2．文明行為：講禮貌，有愛(ài)心； 維護(hù)校園環(huán)境，愛(ài)護(hù)一草一木； 勤奮學(xué)習(xí)，遵守校規(guī) ……

注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于80 ； 
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)與結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
4．參考詞匯；
文明行為civilized behaviors   和諧harmony (n.)
Good afternoon, teachers and students．I feel honored to make a speech here．The title is “Be a Civilized Student, Construct a Harmonious School”．
                                                                       
                                                                       
That’s all．Thank you!

Answer 1

Good afternoon, teachers and students．I feel honored to make a speech here．The title is “Be a Civilized Student, Construct a Harmonious School”．
As everybody knows, civilized behaviors are of great importance for a student．They not only show our good qualities but also make ourselves enjoy the harmony of school life, in which we can gain a better result of study．
How can we develop civilized behaviors? The first important thing we should do is to be a student with good manners and a student always ready to help people in need．Besides, we should keep the school environment clean. Never destroy the plants in our school, such as flowers, trees and grass. Most importantly, we should remember hard working and obeying the school rules make up the most necessary civilized behaviors as a student．
That’s all．Thank you!

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。