Question

你校響應(yīng)號(hào)召創(chuàng)建節(jié)約型校園，可是浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象依然極其嚴(yán)重。請(qǐng)你在班會(huì)課上發(fā)表演講，號(hào)召同學(xué)們從我做起，杜絕浪費(fèi)。內(nèi)容包括：
浪費(fèi)的東西有水、電、餐廳的食物等；
危害性：自身性格、父母經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)、自然資源等；
提出措施。
注意：
詞數(shù)120左右，演講的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不記入總詞數(shù)；
不要逐次逐條翻譯，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。
Dear friends,
May I have you attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.
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Answer 1

Dear friends,
May I have you attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.
As we all know, there is a lot of waste on campus. For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, keep water running after washing and leave a lot of food uneaten on the table. Some students even throw away their exercise books with only a few pages written.
So it is high time that we had to deal with the problem. The reasons are as follows. In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad influence on our character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to our parents. Last but not least, it also exhausts the world’s very limited natural resources---water, electricity, and so on. Then how to reduce the waste?
In my opinion, it is everybody’s responsibility to fight against this phenomenon. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in saving energy and reducing waste.
That’s all. Thank!

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。
考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。