第Ⅱ卷（非選擇題　共35分）
第三部分　寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分35分）
第一節(jié)　短文改錯(cuò)（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌的以下作文。文章共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改詞均僅限一詞；
　　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
Dear Editor,
I' m writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days -ago, my neighbor ate　a bag of food buying from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces　turn pale. Fortunately, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called on an　ambulance, which carded them quickly to a hospital. After several hours' treatment they finally escaped from death.
As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures or care which happens to consumers. They must be charged with law. Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.
Yours,
Wang Ming


neighbor改為neighbors；      buying改為bought；        turn改為turned；  
去掉on；                   only前加are；             we改為they；  
which改為what；            with改為by；  
whole前加the／our；         important改為importance。

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