Question

你校正在進(jìn)行“英語讀書周”活動。該活動要求學(xué)生摘錄名言佳句（quote）并相互交流，以下是某同學(xué)的句子：“Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you.”請按下列要求用英語寫一篇100~120個詞的短文：
1.  針對摘錄句中的觀點(diǎn)談?wù)勀愕目捶?br />2.  舉例說明理由
注意：
短文的開頭已給出（不計詞數(shù)）。
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this_: "Your future depends on many things, hut mostly on you. "
                                                                                                
                                                                                                
                                                                                                
                                                                                                

Answer 1

One possible version:
In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this; "Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you. " I can't agree more with this view. It's true that our future is determined by many things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.
Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his childhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the 'history of America. Even to this day. Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.

【考點(diǎn)】觀點(diǎn)類議論文—開放式
【寫作指導(dǎo)】試題材料新穎，貼近考生實(shí)際生活，屬于半開放性話題。 對既定的話題進(jìn)行討論，考生有一定的自由發(fā)揮空間，暢所欲言，各抒己見。論點(diǎn)明確，論據(jù)充分是得分的關(guān)鍵。如能靈活運(yùn)用學(xué)過而且熟練的亮點(diǎn)詞匯、短語和句型，盡量變換句式，長短句交錯使用，并且恰當(dāng)?shù)卮┎逡恍┻^渡性詞語，使文章自然、流暢，有較強(qiáng)的邏輯性，文章一定會脫穎而出。在寫作時注意把握好以下幾點(diǎn)：(1)書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔。(2)行文緊湊，過渡自然。(3)要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)清楚。(4)語法正確，時態(tài)準(zhǔn)確。(5)用詞無誤，控制得當(dāng)(80-120詞之間)。(6)認(rèn)真復(fù)查，胸有成竹。