Question

四川蘆山地震引起社會(huì)各界極大關(guān)注, 你在美國的朋友來信詢問具體情況，用英語寫一篇回信介紹地震情況�；匦艃�(nèi)容包括：

時(shí)間	2013年4月20日早上8點(diǎn)02分
震中	四川雅安蘆山
強(qiáng)度	汶川地震以來最大
影響	截至4月24日，造成193人死亡，12211人受傷,許多房屋倒塌，若干人失蹤，成千人無家可歸。
各界反應(yīng)	?  (至少兩點(diǎn))

 

字?jǐn)?shù)要求：100個(gè)單詞左右

Dear Tom,

I’m very happy to hear from you . Thanks for your concern about what happened in Sichuan. On April 20^th, 2013，

____________________________________________________________________________

yours,  Wang Li

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

I am happy to hear from you. Thanks for your concern about what has happened in Sichuan recently. On April 20, 2013.，a terrible earthquake struck Lushan，Ya’an at 8:02

Being the strongest earthquake in China since the 2008 Wenchuan earthquake, it caused 193 deaths and 12211 injuries. A great number of houses and buildings were destroyed. Quite a few people were made missing and thousands of people homeless.

Fortunately, the government took action immediately. Soldiers were sent there to rescue the people from danger, and lots of volunteers offered to help. Large quantities of food, water, tents, and medicine were transported from all over China and other parts of the world to the earthquake-stricken area.

Best wishes                                            

yours,

Wang Lin

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。