Question

你們學(xué)校在為一批來(lái)自英國(guó)的交流學(xué)生（exchange students） 征尋為期一周的住宿(accommodation)家庭。假定你叫李華，寫一封信給校長(zhǎng)申請(qǐng)接待來(lái)自英國(guó)的交流學(xué)生。信的內(nèi)容需包括：

1. 說(shuō)明你申請(qǐng)的理由。

2. 你家所具備的接待條件。

（字?jǐn)?shù)120詞左右，可緊扣題目適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

   Dear principal

   My name is Li Hua, a senior three student, I have learned that our school is seeking some some students’ families which can offer proper one week accommodation for exchange students from England. I think my family meets the requerements.

   My parents and I are now living in a flat with three bedrooms and two living rooms. So we have a spare room for one or two exchanging students. My mother is a warm-hearted woman who likes kids very much and is quite good cooking. We will prepare a lot of delicious traditional Chinese food for the exchange students and I will show them my collections of stamps and coins. And we will also chat with them about the different cultures and customs of the two countries. Besides, receiving exchange students is a wonderful chance for me to communicate with native speakers in English.

  I believe they will have a good time in my family and hope that you will give me the chance.

  I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application.

                                                            Sincerely yours

                                                             Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：作文為一篇材料作文，就內(nèi)容來(lái)講包括兩個(gè)方面的問題，一是審請(qǐng)交流學(xué)生住在自己家里的理由，二是如果申請(qǐng)成功家里具備什么的條件在審題的時(shí)候不要遺漏作文的內(nèi)容。二是審時(shí)態(tài)，本文在寫作時(shí)所用時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為現(xiàn)在時(shí)或?qū)��?lái)時(shí)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中很順其自然地使用了定語(yǔ)從句，例如I have learned that our school is seeking some some students’ families which can offer proper one week accommodation for exchange students from England.定語(yǔ)從句的先行詞為families。使用which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句。My mother is a warm-hearted woman who likes kids very much and is quite good cooking.在本句中先行詞為woman,。I’d appreciate it if you could consider my application.

文章的最后一句使用固定句型，Iwould appreciate if ----.如果----，我將非常的感謝。

考點(diǎn): 考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言的綜合運(yùn)用能力