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假如你是李華，一位18歲的男孩，英語成績非常突出，有兩年英語家教的經(jīng)驗(yàn)，現(xiàn)在是學(xué)�！皭坌木銟凡俊钡某蓡T，認(rèn)為志愿工作能夠使人樹立信心，培養(yǎng)良好的交際技能�？吹较旅孢@則招聘信息，你愿意利用這次機(jī)會(huì)，為需要幫助的兒童獻(xiàn)出自己的微薄之力，同時(shí)增長見識(shí)，了解社會(huì)。
請根據(jù)所給中、英文提示完成下面的英文郵件。
注意：1．110詞左右。
2．郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。 
3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。
提示詞：tutor vt. & n. 家教         Loving Heart Club 愛心俱樂部

	A Voluntary Activity In the winter vacation 5 Volunteers Wanted As English teachers At S.O.S Children’s Village Purposes for applying Those who are interested in taking part in the activity, please send an email to studentunion@bjsz.cn before Jan. 24th, 2008. Student Union

 

 
Dear Student Union,
I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers of the five．Now I’m writing here to apply for this opportunity．
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I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application. I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@ 163.com,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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Dear Student Union,
I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers of the five．Now I’m writing here to apply for this opportunity．
 
In my opinion, being a volunteer teacher at the SOS village is obviously more than just teaching; furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizons and improve our understanding of the world. That’s why I’d like very much to take this opportunity and make the most of my special talents and interests. By helping those kids, I feel I can make a big difference to their future and make a small contribution to society．
I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application. I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@ 163.com,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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