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生活中困難不可避免，面對(duì)各種困難需要信心。假如你是李華，嘗試舉例說(shuō)明信心在學(xué)習(xí)、考試、生活等方面的作用，并就面對(duì)困難的態(tài)度談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

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It is well-known that we live in a dynamic world with various difficulties.?????????????????????????????????

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

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One possible version：

It is well-known that we live in a dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometimes the problem is not as big as we imagine.

Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster. Accordingly, some people give up, but some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in a right manner. Nothing is impossible and just do it!

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求就面對(duì)困難的態(tài)度和在困難面前信心所起的作用來(lái)展開(kāi)行文。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以根據(jù)提示把文章分成兩個(gè)方面，一是提出信心在困難中的作用；二是談對(duì)困難的態(tài)度和看法。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型，圍繞主題，將意思完整清楚地表達(dá)出來(lái)。同時(shí)，還要注意使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)、讓步、轉(zhuǎn)折、因果等意義的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)，以增強(qiáng)文章的連貫性和流暢性。寫(xiě)作時(shí)可能用到的短語(yǔ)：for example；have difficulty in doing sth； there is no difficulty in doing sth ; in face of difficulty 等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)合理，層次分明，在文章開(kāi)頭首先提出信心在面對(duì)困難時(shí)的重要性，然后在第二段以高考為例來(lái)說(shuō)明信心的作用，最后提出作者自己對(duì)待困難的態(tài)度，這種謀篇布局的方式顯示了作者思路的清晰。在句式方面作者使用了經(jīng)典的It is well-known that…., nothing is more important than …..等，而且文中出現(xiàn)的大量短語(yǔ)be faced with、With confidence、Take …. for example、On the whole、In my eyes、和副詞Accordingly不僅反映了作者豐富的詞匯知識(shí)，也豐富了文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章語(yǔ)言更為流暢、自然。

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