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第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá) (滿(mǎn)分35分)
2010年上海 “世博會(huì)”如期召開(kāi)，倡導(dǎo)“城市讓生活更美好”，假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你向?qū)W校英語(yǔ)報(bào)投稿，談?wù)勀阈闹械睦硐氤鞘�。�?nèi)容包括如下幾點(diǎn)：
1）交通    2）自然環(huán)境   3）人文環(huán)境 ( 如人際關(guān)系 )
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好；2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear editor,
With Shanghai Expo being held as expected, the theme of “Better City, Better Life” has been become widely known all over the world. ______________________________________________
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Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua        

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Dear editor, 
With Shanghai Expo being held as expected, the theme “Better City, Better Life” has been widely known all over the world. Here I’m writing to share the idea of my dream city.
In my opinion, a wonderful city should be one that distinguishes in the following aspects. To begin with, an appealing city should provide convenient and comfortable transport, which means people can easily choose whatever ways to travel anywhere. Besides, it should offer people a pleasant environment with plenty of green trees, clean streets as well as fresh air. Last but not least, in a charming city, citizens can enjoy a friendly and harmonious community and are always ready to help and care about each other.
In a word, an attractive city is one highly developed in different areas to make sure people can live happily.
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua

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