Question

假如你叫李鋼，今年考上了大學(xué)，但家境貧寒，交不起學(xué)費(fèi)。一位姓劉的教授得知此事之后伸出了援助之手�，F(xiàn)在給他寫一封信，內(nèi)容包括：
1. 教授如何幫助的你；
2. 你的未來打算；（至少兩點(diǎn)）
3. 如何感謝。
注意：內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)100左右。
Dear Mr. Liu,
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Gang

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Liu,
I am glad to have received your letter and 6,000 yuan.  My family and I are very happy. Thank you very much for your kindness and your money.
With your help, I will have no difficulty in studying at university. As a result, I have made up my mind to study hard. I’m sure I will make great progress. I’m going back to my hometown after I graduate from university ,and devote myself to building my hometown.
My parents and I are going to pay a visit to you this winter holiday. In the end, let me say “Thank you” once again for your kind help.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Gang

試題分析：本文考查半開放性作文的寫作。文章的要點(diǎn)給的很少，需要考生自己去組織語言，去組織要點(diǎn)。教授對(duì)你的幫助可以從學(xué)習(xí)上經(jīng)濟(jì)上來考慮。你的未來打算可以從努力學(xué)習(xí)，鍛煉能力等方面著手。用優(yōu)秀的學(xué)習(xí)成績(jī)來感謝教授的幫助。在具體寫作的時(shí)候要使用合適的連接詞，高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型來提升文章的層次。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性短文對(duì)考生的要求很高，要求自行篩選要點(diǎn)。用心謀篇布局，在個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)方面做適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，可以使用合適的諺語來提升文章的層次。