Question

每位同學(xué)都希望自己具有良好的人際關(guān)系，成為班級(jí)中受歡迎的人。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫(xiě)一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語(yǔ)短文，參加學(xué)校網(wǎng)站英語(yǔ)論壇的討論。

受人喜愛(ài)的 個(gè)性品質(zhì)	對(duì)待集體	熱心班級(jí)活動(dòng)，具有團(tuán)隊(duì)精神，工作負(fù)責(zé)
對(duì)待他人	尊重、關(guān)心他人，富有同情心，……
對(duì)待自己	（請(qǐng)考生自己擬定內(nèi)容，列舉至少兩點(diǎn)）……

注意：1．短文必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2．短文標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；  3．詞數(shù)：120左右。

Being a popular student

We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers_________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．To enjoy popularity, we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and try our best to take an active part in all our class activities．We should be responsible for the work and keep teamwork spirit in mind.

To be a popular student, we must show our respect, concern and sympathy for others．As a result, we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need.

To be a popular student, we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make an effort to achieve all-round development, being good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music, painting, social services and so on．In time of success we remain modest, while in time of difficulity we keep strong-minded.

All in all, being a popular student among the classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities.

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于議論文體，提出一個(gè)主題，對(duì)這個(gè)主題展開(kāi)討論。對(duì)于這類文體宜采用三段式文章，第一段首先對(duì)從對(duì)待集體方面的態(tài)度和做法進(jìn)行說(shuō)明；第二段從對(duì)待他人的態(tài)度方面著手，結(jié)合文章的提示，進(jìn)行說(shuō)明；第三段通過(guò)對(duì)待自己的態(tài)度來(lái)對(duì)如何受歡迎陳述自己是如何做的，中間需要運(yùn)用上表起承轉(zhuǎn)合的連詞、定語(yǔ)從句、倒裝等語(yǔ)法現(xiàn)象使文章富有深度、句式多變。

考點(diǎn)：議論文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：書(shū)面表達(dá)是最能體現(xiàn)一個(gè)學(xué)生的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力和英語(yǔ)思維理解的題目，議論文的寫(xiě)作是比較容易的文體，提高作文無(wú)外乎平時(shí)多練習(xí)，在練習(xí)過(guò)程中，對(duì)于寫(xiě)錯(cuò)或是不知道表達(dá)的一定要多問(wèn)老師，同時(shí)還應(yīng)該多進(jìn)行閱讀，對(duì)閱讀過(guò)程中寫(xiě)的好的表達(dá)要進(jìn)行積累，并且學(xué)以致用，勤積累，多背誦，這樣才能作文才能穩(wěn)步的提升。