Question

書面表達(滿分30分)

中美中學(xué)生交流項目安排一批美國中學(xué)生來華一周體驗中國文化，在網(wǎng)上挑選適合住宿的家庭（homestay family）。假如你是北侖中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，愿意接受一位美國學(xué)生入住你家，請用英語給項目美方負責(zé)人寫一封郵件，說明你的家庭和住宿條件，你本人的優(yōu)勢以及你幫助美國中學(xué)生體驗中國文化的打算。

注意：

1．可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)；

2．詞數(shù)：100左右；開頭和結(jié)尾已給出不計入總詞數(shù)；

Dear sir,

I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the Americanstudents.____________________________________________________________

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Looking forward to your reply.

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear sir,

I am writing to request the valuable chance to be one of the homestay families for the American students.

My parents are in favor of my idea that I host an American student. We live in a beautiful community. Luckily, we have extra room for guests so that they can have private living space. I am a student of Xinhua high school, open-minded and enthusiastic. What’s more, I’m quite good at languages and we can communicate well in English.

If an American student stays with us, I’ll be a good guide to some local places of interest, which are famous in our area. Besides, My parents and I will help her to make Chinese meals, such as jiaozi, noodles, and other foods.

We have the confidence to make the American student feel at home and have some sweet memories.

Looking forward to your reply.          

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。這是封申請信，愿意接受一位美國學(xué)生入住你家，要點都已經(jīng)給出，審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述。象范文的If an American student stays with us, I’ll be a good guide to some local places of interest, which are famous in our area.使用了非限制性定語從句，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來，象what’s more和besides等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。

考點：考查書信類短文寫作。

點評：書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。