Question

根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一篇120—150 的英語(yǔ)短文，發(fā)表在某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)上。
假如你校開(kāi)展了中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活的討論，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示發(fā)言：
　　1. 合理安排學(xué)習(xí)和生活   2. 融洽同學(xué)之間的關(guān)系   3. 積極參加校園社團(tuán)活動(dòng)
　　注意：字?jǐn)?shù)120—150
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Answer 1

  Attention, please. Now I have the chance to express my opinion on our school life.
As middle school students, we are living a completely busy life. So here is something you should pay much attention. First, arrange your time properly. You’d better make a timetable so that you will know what to do and how to do it and make full use of every minute. It will make your work more effectively.
Living in the school, sometimes you may face some problems that you can’t work out by yourself. Help from others will make everything easy for you. So get along well with all the people around you. Always be open-minded and warm-hearted. Don’t speak ill of others behind his or her back. You should always bear in mind that we are in a big family.
At last, take an active part in societies at school, which are your second teachers. It will not only provide you the chances to make friends and challenge yourself, but also make your school life rich and colorful as well.
Here hope all of us can enjoy our school life. Thank you!

解析試題分析：這是一篇發(fā)言稿，所以在語(yǔ)言的使用上要大眾化，另外注意題目的要求1.合理安排學(xué)習(xí)和生活   2. 融洽同學(xué)之間的關(guān)系   3. 積極參加校園社團(tuán)活動(dòng)。所以要按照這樣一個(gè)順序去寫(xiě)，注意不要有遺漏。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略,故需要充實(shí)文章內(nèi)容，需要注意不要偏離文章中心。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式。
考點(diǎn)：發(fā)言稿
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于發(fā)言稿，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。并且注意字?jǐn)?shù)限制