Question

每位同學(xué)都希望自己具有良好的人際關(guān)系，成為班級(jí)中受歡迎的人。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇題為“Being a Popular Student”的英語短文，參加學(xué)校網(wǎng)站英語論壇的討論。

受人喜愛的個(gè)性品質(zhì)	對(duì)待集體	熱心班級(jí)活動(dòng)，具有團(tuán)隊(duì)精神，工作負(fù)責(zé)，……
	對(duì)待他人	尊重、關(guān)心他人，富有同情心，……
	對(duì)待自己	(請(qǐng)考生自己實(shí)際擬定內(nèi)容，列舉至少兩點(diǎn)) ……

注意：1．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。

             2．詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Being a Popular Student

We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers.

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Answer 1

One possible version:

Being a Popular Student

We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers. To enjoy popularity, we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to sacrifice our personal interests whenever necessary. While taking an active part in all our class activities, we should work responsibly to build up a good reputation as a team.  

To be students with high popularity, we are to show respect, concern and sympathy for others. As a result, we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need.

To be a popular student, we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development, being good not only at our lessons but also at sports, music, painting, social services and so on. In time of success we remain modest, while in time of difficulty we keep strong-minded. 

All in all, popularity among classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities.

解析:

本篇書面表達(dá)非常貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，話題內(nèi)容能夠讓學(xué)生在結(jié)合在校生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)的基礎(chǔ)上運(yùn)用所學(xué)知識(shí)，表達(dá)自己的思想。

1.注意幾個(gè)關(guān)鍵信息和特點(diǎn)：

A.三個(gè)表述方向“對(duì)待集體，他人和自己”

B．對(duì)待自己方面要求“列舉至少兩點(diǎn)”

C．本文有一定的開放性，能讓學(xué)生更多的施展才華，彰顯個(gè)性，但要注意方向性和限制性，不能亂表達(dá)。