Question

短文改錯(cuò)

I felt sadly yesterday when our teacher told us something about the Project Hope in class. It has set up to help the children in the countryside who can't pay to go to school. After school I came home. I was wondering if I could do something for the Project then I caught sight of money－collecting box on the table. Then I made up my minds to send my pocket money which I had saved for almost one year to the children who wanted to go to school. I wrote a letter to them and hurried to the post office. Together with the letter I posted the money and sent with my best wishes to them.

1．________　　2．________　　3．________　　4．________

5．________　　6．________　　7．________　　8．________

9．________　　10．________

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解析：

1．sadly改為sad。feel“感到”是聯(lián)系動(dòng)詞，后接形容詞作表語(yǔ)。 　　2．has后加been。It指代the Project Hope，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。 　　3．pay改為afford。pay…to do sth．表示“為做……付款／給錢”，而這里指孩子們不能支付上學(xué)的費(fèi)用，afford更準(zhǔn)確。 　　4．√。 　　5．then改為when。when在這里是并列連詞，意為“正在此時(shí)，就在這時(shí)”，它連接兩個(gè)并列分句，相當(dāng)于and then，and at that time。 　　6．money－collecting box前加the或my，表示特指。 　　7．minds改為mind。make up one's mind為固定短語(yǔ)，意為“下定決心”。 　　8．a(chǎn)lmost改為nearly。almost和nearly兩個(gè)詞都有“差不多、幾乎”的意思，但放在具體數(shù)字前時(shí)，常用nearly，而不用almost。 　　9．wanted改為want。孩子們想上學(xué)的心情和意愿是一種客觀事實(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)比較好。 　　10．刪去with。send在這里表示“傳、寄、送”，是及物動(dòng)詞，with多余。