Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Last Sunday I witness a traffic accident on my way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away. I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. Luckily, they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance. As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 Witness改成witnessed

 while改成when

 went前面加a

 去掉far

 bad改成badly

 trap改成trapped

 on 改成in

 As改成it

 safe改成safety

 them.改成themselves

【解析】

試題分析：

 時(shí)間是Last Sunday，Witness用過(guò)去時(shí)，改成witnessed

 while引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，表示“一段時(shí)間”，when 是“這時(shí)”，表示“時(shí)間點(diǎn)”，句意：我正在路上走，這時(shí)聽(tīng)見(jiàn)一聲撞擊聲。

 a loud crash泛指“一聲很響的撞擊聲”

 ten meters away.是“距離有10米遠(yuǎn)”，去掉多余的far

 修飾形容詞injured 應(yīng)該用副詞：badly

 two drivers 和trap是被動(dòng)關(guān)系，用過(guò)去分詞做狀語(yǔ)trapped

 on time“準(zhǔn)時(shí)”， in time及時(shí)，句意：幸運(yùn)的是他們被及時(shí)救了。

 As引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，這句話明顯不是： it is clear that...很明顯...,it是形式主語(yǔ)，

 句意：這表明他們?nèi)狈ψ钭约汉蛣e人安全的關(guān)心。用名詞safety

 用themselves指代 the taxi drivers

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)