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第二節(jié)；書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
90后出生的學(xué)生，思想特殊、行為方式和價(jià)值觀令人擔(dān)憂。假如你是一名90后出生的學(xué)生劉林，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表中所提供信息以“Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿，以消除人們的憂慮。

90后的境遇	面臨更多的升學(xué)和就業(yè)煩惱，所處環(huán)境競(jìng)爭(zhēng)更加激烈。
人們的憂慮		1．注重自我，輕視合作，…… 2．缺乏毅力，容易氣餒，…… 3．盲目追求，渴望成名，……
我們的長(zhǎng)處	敢于挑戰(zhàn)，…… （請(qǐng)考生聯(lián)系自己擬定內(nèi)容，再列舉兩至三點(diǎn)。）

注意：1．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。
2．詞數(shù)150左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．演講稿中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。
Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”.
Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed.                                                                               __________________________________________________________________
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Thank you for your listening!

Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone!
The topic of my speech today is “Do trust us—a generation born in the 90s”.
Living in an environment full of fiercer competition, we, a generation born in the 90s, are faced with more problems in entering higher schools and getting employed. Under these circumstances, we are developing our special manners and values, which has raised people’s concern.
They worry we care too much about ourselves and are unwilling to cooperate with others, which makes it hard for us to achieve success in whatever we do. Besides, they consider us as lacking in determination, and this is what it takes to do any job well. Without it, we may easily give up in time of difficulty. They are also concerned that we are so eager to win instant fame that we follow fashion blindly, which will in turn ruin our values and future.
However, we, a generation born in the 90s, have our own advantages despite some weaknesses. Firstly, we have the courage to meet challenges and take risks, which helps realize our dreams. In addition, we are quick-minded and creative. We can do our work more efficiently. Yet, we still need to learn more from those experienced. Please do trust us!
Thank you for your listening!
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