Question

假設(shè)你是王林，最近你的的筆友John 就媒體中頻頻出現(xiàn)的“富二代”發(fā)電子郵件向你詢問。請你給他回封郵件向他解釋，具體內(nèi)容如下：
1. “富二代”指生于二十世紀(jì)八十年代的年輕人；
2. 繼承了父輩資產(chǎn)，接受過良好教育；
3. 目前人們對“富二代”的看法。
注意：
1. 開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2. 不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容以使行文連貫；
3. 詞數(shù)100左右。
Dear John,
I’m very pleased to receive your email. ______________________________________
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I wonder if my answers suit you. please write back soon.
Yours
Wan Lin

Answer 1

Dear John,
I’m very pleased to receive your email. You asked me the meaning of rich second generation in chinese language. The following is what I think about it.
In recent years many new terms have come into use, one of which is rich second generation. It means those who were born in the 1980s and inherited millions of prosperty of their parents. At the same time, they received good education and now live a happy life. Generally speaking, some of them are indeed successful in their careers. Some are playboys and most of them are ordinary in everything.
In my opinion, people can be happy, just depending on themselves. Those who rely on others cannot get real happiness. On the contray, they will lose everthing.
I wonder if my answers suit you. please write back soon.
Yours
Wan Lin

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。同時也屬于提綱類作文，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，向你的筆友John 就媒體中頻頻出現(xiàn)的“富二代”進(jìn)行解釋，包括1. “富二代”指生于二十世紀(jì)八十年代的年輕人； 2. 繼承了父輩資產(chǎn)，接受過良好教育； 3. 目前人們對“富二代”的看法。審題時注意本文使用的時態(tài)，運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。如范文里面的In recent years many new terms have come into use, one of which is rich second generation. It means those who were born in the 1980s and inherited millions of prosperty of their parents.還有要用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞把文章串聯(lián)起來：At the same time, Generally speaking等等。
點(diǎn)評：提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，詞匯句型的選用，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。