Question

假設(shè)你是高三(1)班的學(xué)生李華，你校網(wǎng)站刊登了一則“走進(jìn)英國(guó)家庭”活動(dòng)的通知。

你想?yún)⒓釉摶顒?dòng)。請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給該活動(dòng)負(fù)責(zé)人張老師發(fā)一封電子郵件申請(qǐng)參加。

內(nèi)容主要包括：

1．你參加該活動(dòng)的目的；

2．你的興趣、特長(zhǎng)；

3．你希望走進(jìn)什么樣的家庭。

注意：1．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

2．詞數(shù)100左右。短文開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

Dear Mr Zhang,

I am Li Hua,a student from Class l, Senior 3.I am longing to join in this activity because

Looking forward to your early replay.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr Zhang,

I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Senior 3. I am longing to join in this activity because

I think it a good opportunity for me to improve my English and I can also learn more about British history and its culture.

I have many hobbies, for example, I like surfing the Internet and doing sports. My favorite sport is basketball and I often play it on weekends. Besides, I am good at drawing and I like listening to music.

If I am lucky enough to have the chance, I hope to live in a family that are friendly to me and are willing to take me to visit around often. I am sure I can get along well with my host family. I wound appreciate it if you could help me achieve my dream.

Looking forward to your early replay.

Yours sincerely

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：

作文以寫(xiě)郵件的形式，注意郵件格式，內(nèi)容包括參加的目的、你的興趣、特長(zhǎng)，你想進(jìn)入什么樣的家庭。認(rèn)真審題，知道要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，把要點(diǎn)加以整理，用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫瓦M(jìn)行概括；概括時(shí)可以主要用簡(jiǎn)單句，也可以適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句，但要確保復(fù)雜句使用正確；切記要點(diǎn)要全，不要遺漏；注意語(yǔ)法正確，單詞拼寫(xiě)正確，字體干凈。

考點(diǎn)：考查學(xué)生的綜合語(yǔ)言能力

點(diǎn)評(píng)：要認(rèn)真審題，用正確的語(yǔ)言表示。切記要點(diǎn)要全，不要遺漏；注意語(yǔ)法正確，單詞拼寫(xiě)正確，字體干凈。