Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。

Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum (流浪漢) in the toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. Before the police came, they told the passengers to get into the bus and stay far away. Then they closed the highway, as a result of whom a 15-mile-long traffic jam was soon caused. With the help of the dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no bomb.

 

Answer 1

1.第一行so去掉

2.第二行：her改成him;

3.第二行：say改成said

4.第三行:passing改成passed

5.第四行：加was

6.第五行：immediate改成immediately

7.第六行：Before改成When/ After

8.第六行into改成off

9.第七行：whom 改成which

10.第八行：the改成a

【解析】

1. 考查連詞。在英語中有because沒有so,有though沒有but,所以去掉so.

2. 考查人稱一致。句意：但是一個乘客看到了他。根據(jù)上文提到Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet所以是男性，故改成him.

3. 考查動詞時態(tài)。And連接tapped與say時態(tài)保持一致，所以用一般過去時。

4. 考查動詞的語態(tài)。句意：這個消息一個人一個人的傳過去。消息與pass之間是被動關(guān)系，所以改成被動語態(tài)。

5. 考查動詞的語態(tài)。句意：司機(jī)被告知流浪漢在廁所里。司機(jī)被告知這件事，所以用被動語態(tài)。

6. 考查副詞。句意：他立即停車給警察打電話。Immediately立即地修飾動詞stop.

7.五行：Before改成When/ After 考查連詞。句意：當(dāng)警察來了之后，他們告訴乘客下車，離遠(yuǎn)點(diǎn)。根據(jù)下文they told the passagers,可見警察已經(jīng)來了，所以改成When/ After。

8. 考查動詞短語。根據(jù)語境讓乘客下車，所以get off the bus 下車。

9. 考查定語從句引導(dǎo)詞。句意：他們關(guān)閉高速公路，結(jié)果，造成交通阻塞。做為這件事的結(jié)果，which代指這件事。

10. 考查冠詞。句意：在一只狗的幫助下，他們找了兩個小時。第一次提到所以用a.

考點(diǎn)：短文改錯。