Question

假定你是Jack，你的中國(guó)朋友李華作為交換生剛到英國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)不久，他被邀請(qǐng)參加一個(gè)英國(guó)家庭的家庭宴會(huì)，他不知道該如何做才合適，請(qǐng)你給他通過(guò)電子郵件提出一些建議：

1. 穿著要精干    2. 按時(shí)到達(dá)  3. 帶上小禮物（一瓶酒，一盒巧克力或鮮花 

4. 就餐時(shí)要注意禮貌舉止，不要喝太多的酒，不要大聲喧嘩

5. 就餐后不要逗留太久         6. 一兩天后給主人寫(xiě)答謝信

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

2. 文章開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。

Dear Li Hua,

How is it going? Glad to receive your letter again. As for the family dinner party, I will give you some advice as follows.

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Yours sincerely

Jack

 

Answer 1

【答案】

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Dear Li Hua,

How is it going? Glad to receive your letter again. As for the family dinner party, I will give you some advice as follows.

As it is a formal party, you had better dress smartly. You should arrive on time with some small gifts such as a bottle of wine, a box of chocolate or just a bunch of flowers. At dinner, do remember to mind your manners. Please don’t drink too much and don’t speak loudly. After the dinner，out of politeness, you should stay for a while to chat with other guests and the host, but don’t overstay your welcome. One or two days later, it would be better to write a letter of thanks to the host to express your gratitude to their hospitality (好客). 

Wish you all the best!

Yours sincerely

Jack

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，要點(diǎn)和信的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出.我們所要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái).本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較簡(jiǎn)略,故需要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多.需要注意不要偏離文章中心.寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開(kāi)頭結(jié)尾,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題.盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

考點(diǎn)：書(shū)信類(lèi)作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于書(shū)信類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。