Question

短文寫作

請根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你校園中的一個事例，就“失敗”這一話題，用英語寫一篇短文。

Everyone has experienced failure．In face of failure, people act differently．Some simply give up, while some still stick to what they are doing．How we respond to it decides whether we'll succeed．

注意：①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；

②除詩歌外，文體不限；

③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合校園生活中的一個事例；

④文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

⑤詞數(shù)120左右。

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

　　評分原則：

　　1、主要結(jié)構(gòu)正確、用給定的英語詞完整表達所給的漢語信息，給滿分；

　　2、未用給定詞不給分；

　　3、主要結(jié)構(gòu)不正確不給分；

　　4、主要結(jié)構(gòu)正確，信息完整，但一個或一個以上拼寫錯誤扣0.5分；

　　5、主要結(jié)構(gòu)正確，信息有遺漏扣0.5分；

　　6、主要結(jié)構(gòu)正確，添加無關(guān)信息扣0.5分；

　　7、其它可以接受的可能答案。

　　書面表達：One possible version：

　　It's universally accepted that we all may have to face failure many times．For example, as senior students, we may suffer failures in exams．Discouraging as failure are, we must keep a good state of mind and go on with our work, not let failure stand in the way of our success．

　　I can still remember clearly that I suffered many a failure and felt annoyed．But I managed to calm myself down and reflected our learning methods, making some changes when necessary．Meanwhile, I turned to my teachers and followed students for advice．By sticking to my study persistently I have made steady progress．I truly hope I can be a success later in life．

　　Anyhow, it is impossible to live without failing at something, and it is our attitude to it that determines whether we can really make a difference．(142w)