Question

假如有一批澳大利亞中學(xué)生在京旅游，住在北京飯店，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)為他們擬一個(gè)參觀頤和園的口頭通知, 內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下:
1．參觀時(shí)間: 10月15日，星期三
2．頤和園簡(jiǎn)介: 它是中國(guó)最大的保存最完好的皇家(royal)園林, 風(fēng)景優(yōu)美, 甚是迷人, 有山有水, 有皇家建筑和畫(huà)廊。
3．活動(dòng)安排: 上午自由參觀, 中午在快餐館吃午飯, 下午5:30返回賓館。
4．集合時(shí)間: 星期三早上6:10, 汽車(chē)6:30開(kāi), 行駛45分鐘。
5．集合地點(diǎn): 賓館大門(mén)口。
要求: 不要逐條翻譯, 詞數(shù)100詞左右 。注意通知格式。
Boys and girls,
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Answer 1

Boys and girls,
May I have your attention? I have an announcement to make.
We will visit the summer Palace on Wednesday, October 15. The Summer Palace is the largest well-kept royal park in China. In the park there is water and man-piled hills. There are some royal buildings and a gallery, too. I am sure you will be struck by its beautiful scenery. In the morning we will be free to visit the different places of the Palace and then we will have lunch in the fast-food restaurant. We will get back to the hotel at half five. Please gather at the hotel gate at 6:10 on Wednesday morning. The buses will start at 6:30. It will take us about 45 minutes to get there. Please be on time. Thank you.

解析試題分析：這篇作文是口頭通知，要點(diǎn)是以提綱形式出現(xiàn)的，包括簡(jiǎn)介，時(shí)間地點(diǎn)和安排，要點(diǎn)要覆蓋全，為了文章連貫也可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。還有就是時(shí)態(tài)的問(wèn)題，應(yīng)該是一般將來(lái)時(shí)，還有通知中有地點(diǎn)，時(shí)間，注意英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)法，因?yàn)槭强陬^通知，可以用寫(xiě)簡(jiǎn)潔的句子，不要太復(fù)雜，要點(diǎn)交代清楚就行。
考點(diǎn)：考查應(yīng)用文的寫(xiě)作
點(diǎn)評(píng)：口頭通知是常見(jiàn)的寫(xiě)作形式，注意寫(xiě)作格式，正文的寫(xiě)作套路，還有時(shí)態(tài)，句子的簡(jiǎn)潔。