Question

假設(shè)你是李夏I你的美國筆友Sam來信關(guān)心你參加商考的情況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)回信告知。
1. 考試日期與科目；
2. 考試準(zhǔn)備情況；
3. 考試吋的狀態(tài)；
4. 對(duì)試題的感受；
5. 可能的考試結(jié)果。
注意：
1.      詞數(shù)120左右；
2.      開頭語和結(jié)尾語已為你寫好；
3.      可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié).以使行文連貫；
4.      文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
參考詞匯：college entrance examination
Dear Sam,
Thank you for your concern.                                                           ________________________ 
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Answer 1

One possible version :
Dear Sam ,
Thank you for your concern. I am glad to tell you something about what you asked about our college entrance examination .
The college entrance examination falls on June 7and June 8 every year ,and the subjects that we should prepare for are different depending on each province .Generally speaking , we are busy reviewing and preparing for it the moment we enter senior three ,which is considered a vital period .With the exam approaching , most students will feel nervous and upset .But by now when I am sitting the exam , I feel calm ,because I think the exam is neither too easy nor too difficult . I am sure I will get a good result .But whatever the result is, I will face it calmly. After all , I have made every effort ,and I won’t regret .
Best wishes !                                 
Yours ,
Li Xia

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求寫一封書信，告訴朋友關(guān)于高考的一些情況，屬于應(yīng)用文范疇。書信是同學(xué)們非常熟悉的一種寫作體裁，而且內(nèi)容也是同學(xué)們正在體驗(yàn)著的高考，并且開頭和結(jié)尾又已經(jīng)給出，所以同學(xué)們寫起來應(yīng)該是游刃有余。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意的問題有以下幾個(gè)方面：首先，因?yàn)閮?nèi)容是同學(xué)們正在經(jīng)歷著的關(guān)于高考的事情，所以要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或者現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)。其次，要盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯和句型來提高作文檔次。此外，寫作時(shí)也要使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞以使行文連貫，層次清晰。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，語言流暢，時(shí)態(tài)、人稱和標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)的使用正確，很好的完成了寫作任務(wù)。在作文中作者開門見山提出自己寫信的目的，即告訴Sam有關(guān)高考的事情，這種結(jié)構(gòu)安排符合書信類文體的結(jié)構(gòu)安排。在句式方面作者使用了定語從句which is considered a vital period，狀語從句whatever the result is, 賓語從句what you asked about our college entrance examination等，而且還用到了Generally speaking , With the exam approaching , After all ,等短語，這些短語和句式的使用有效地增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)，提高了作文檔次。