Question

假設你是臨沭一中的學生王偉，班里從外地轉(zhuǎn)來一名同學張寧，他一時無法融入新的班集體中，感到很苦惱。請根據(jù)下列要點用英語給他寫一封信：

*幫他分析原因

*給他提出建議

*陳述你幫助他的具體打算

注意：詞數(shù)120-150

Dear Zhang Ning，

Best regards,    Wang Wei

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Zhang Ning，

I know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. That’s because you are new here and people don’t know about you. But I think you can make it if only you can follow the advice below.

First, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinion about the matters and at the same time, learn to listen to other people’s views. Second, you should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. Then you can have much in common with them. This way, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. Last but not least, I’m always here ready to help. We can take part in some activities together and I can introduce you to others.

With time going on, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as the above.

Yours,

Wang Wei

【解析】

試題分析：本文是給王偉的建議，他無法融入新班級，可能是由于自身的性格不夠開朗，或者對于當?shù)氐奈幕�不夠了解，或者是與他人交往的技巧不夠等原因造成的。提出的建議方面可以從主動和同學進行交流，多參與各種活動，讓其他的同學了解你等。采用了這些技巧，情況應該能夠有所改善。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力。

考點：考察半開放性短文寫作

點評：半開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。