Question

   假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言 錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(八) ,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計(jì)分。

    When you are in public places,you will see many smokers. And most of them were young people and even middle school student. Why do so many people enjoy smoke? Someone once told me that it made him relaxing. In fact,smoking is the bad habit. It does greater harm to our health. For smokers,it is a waste of money,and cause all kinds of diseases. Besides,many fires caused by careless smokers. So never to get into the habit of smoking,but try to stop smoking if you have the habit.

Answer 1

71. . .. were young people ...                         were —?are 

72. . .. school student,                              student —? students

73. . .. enjoy smoke?                                smoke—? smoking

74. . .. made him relaxing.                             relaxing —? relaxed 

75. . .. the bad habit.                                the —? a 

76. . .. greater harm ...                               greater—? great 

77. . .. cause all kinds ...                             cause —?causes 

78. . .. many fires caused ...                            fires 后加 are 

79. So never to ...                                    去掉 to 

80. . .. but try to stop ...                              but —? and