Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分15分）
請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文比較綿陽(yáng)和唐山兩座城市。

綿陽(yáng)	唐山
四川省西北部，距成都以北98公里	地處渤海西北海岸，與北京、天津毗鄰
面積2萬(wàn)平方公里，人口520萬(wàn)	總面積13472平方公里，人口714.5萬(wàn)
干燥少雨，總體氣候宜人	冬干、夏濕；四季分明
我國(guó)重要的科研基地	百年歷史的沿海工業(yè)城市
都曾遭受地震；人民都在努力重建新家園。

注意：1、文章必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2、文章開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3、詞數(shù)：120字左右；
4、參考詞匯：四季分明  four distinctive seasons
If we compare the two cities, we can find both differences and similarities……
                                                                                   
                                                                                   

Answer 1

version 1:
Mianyang is located in the northwest of Sichuan province, about 98 kilometres north of Chengdu, while Tangshan, situated on the northwest coast of the Bohai Sea, is very close to Beijing and Tianjing. In terms of size and population, Mianyang covers an area of 20,000 square kilometers and has a population of 5,2 million. However, Tangshan has a total area of 13,472 square kilometers and 7,145 million inhabitants, Although it rains much less in Mianyang than in Tangshan, the two cities both enjoy a good climate. What’s more, Mianyang is known as an important base of scientific research, while Tangshan is famous as an industrial city with a long history.
Similarly, Mianyang and Tangshan both have been hit by big earthquakes and the people there have been making great efforts to rebuild their new homes ever since.
Version 2:
Mianyang is located in the northwest of Sichuan province, about 98 kilometres north of Chendu. It covers an area of 20,000 square kilometers, and has a population of 5,2 million. Although it is dry and has less rain, Mianyang enjoys a pleasant climate. Besides, Mianyang is known as an important base of scientific research.
Tangshan, situated on the northwest coast of the Bohai Sea, is very close to Beijing and Tianjing. Because of its special location, Tangshan has four distinctive seasons. It is dry in winter but wet in summer. Tangshan has a total area of 13,472 square kilometers and a population of 7,145 million. It is a well-known industrial city with a long history.
However, the two cities still share something: they both have been stricken by great earthquakes, and the people there have been making efforts to rebuild their home ever since.

這是一篇以表格形式為主的作文，要點(diǎn)都在表格中，主要介紹兩個(gè)城市的位置，面積，氣候，重要性，還有共同點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要包括所有的要點(diǎn)，不要遺落，可以適當(dāng)增減使文章連貫，注意用英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)方式，不要有漢語(yǔ)的表達(dá)，注意使用表達(dá)方位，地點(diǎn)，面積的常用表達(dá)方式，如：be located in ，In terms of ，covers an area of ，has a population of 使得表達(dá)更地道。