Question

某英文報(bào)就近年來(lái)我國(guó)學(xué)生出國(guó)留學(xué)低齡化的利弊在報(bào)上展開(kāi)討論，希望廣大讀者暢所欲言，就此事發(fā)表自己的看法。假設(shè)你是中學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)用英語(yǔ)給編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶�。既可以贊同，也可以反�?duì)，但必須說(shuō)明理由。120字左右。

　　(注意：信的開(kāi)頭已給出，字?jǐn)?shù)不計(jì)算在內(nèi)。)

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age.

　　I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing, which helps us to know more about foreign countries, but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early.

　　The education in China and that in foreign countries both have advantages and disadvantages. The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country, people and culture well. Without that, we'll have no root and cannot have a good understanding of other countries, people and cultures.

　　Besides, going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money, it could also bring serious problems. Taking care of themselves is one of them.

　　In my opinion, as primary or middle school students, we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves, when the chance to study abroad arrives, we'll grasp it and make the best use

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái). 動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文提到一些常用短語(yǔ)如at present目前 have a good understanding of  有某方面知識(shí)In my opinion  在我看來(lái)devote our time to 致力于 。I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing, which helps us to know more about foreign countries, but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early.這本句話中提到which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，but引導(dǎo)的轉(zhuǎn)折句，think it adj for sb to do 認(rèn)為某事對(duì)某人來(lái)說(shuō)如何。The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country, people and culture well.這句話中to do 做表語(yǔ)。In my opinion, as primary or middle school students, we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves,，and連接study 和improve并列，時(shí)態(tài)保持一致。本文還運(yùn)用許多連詞如 besides when but 使文章連貫很強(qiáng)的邏輯性。

考點(diǎn)： 提綱類作文