Question

作文（共25分）
下面描繪的是醉酒駕車的違章行為，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)這幅漫畫用英語寫一篇短文。要求:
1.簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片的內(nèi)容, 但不能用引語。
2.分析醉酒駕車的原因及其危害并提出措施。
3.發(fā)表你的看法。
參考詞匯： drunk driving 醉駕
注意：詞數(shù)120左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

This is a picture which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among some drivers in our country. In the picture,________________________________________
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Answer 1

This is a picture which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among some drivers in our country. In the picture, a drunken driver is caught speeding. He has drunk so much that he can’t walk normally
It is well known that drunk driving has been the leading cause of road accidents. What are the reasons for the phenomenon? The lack of safety awareness is the direct reason. Besides, some people believe that drinking a little does no harm to their driving. Drunk driving is a great danger both to our society and to drivers. It’s time we took some measures to make a total ban on drinking. Firstly, we should reinforce the traffic security education to raise people’s awareness towards safety. Secondly, the government should make stricter laws about it and punish drunk drivers severely. Thirdly, we can make posters and signs warning people not to drive after drinking.
In my opinion, people should build up self conscience and pay enough attention to their daily driving. If we can keep on doing this, the road accidents will decrease soon in the future.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖說話類作文，首先必須看懂漫畫的內(nèi)容，描繪的是醉酒駕車的違章行為，所以要用第三人稱來寫。然后再仔細(xì)分析題目的要求:1.簡(jiǎn)要描述圖片的內(nèi)容, 但不能用引語。 2.分析醉酒駕車的原因及其危害并提出措施。 3.發(fā)表你的看法。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時(shí)注意要求的字?jǐn)?shù)詞數(shù)120左右，不要太多也不要太少。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于看圖說話類，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。