Question

Directions:Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
生活中.你白己或他人曾有過物品不慎丟失而又找回的經(jīng)歷，其間有煩惱、有驚喜、有感慨……請就此寫一篇英語短文。
主要內(nèi)容包括, 1)丟失的物品:  2)物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)過;  3) 你的感想。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)不少于120個;
2.不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱.

Answer 1

One possible version:
Three years ago, just before my departure with my good friend Tommy, he got me a wonderful watch as my birthday gift, which I had ever since been treasuring all the time before unfortunately I got it lost.
I used to go everywhere with company of my watch pet but the other day I could go nowhere for its sign. I was so upset and depressed that I lost any desire for doing things and I could not even recall where and how I lost it. What happened next on this morning, however, almost sent my spirits flying higher than sky. Guess what? It found its way back to my dormitory, lying on my bed with a note beside it saying: I’m sure it’s yours, so I brought it back from the library assistant. Jack. 
Ah, my dorm mate Jack found it in the library. Can you imagine how excited I was at that moment? I must offer my thankfulness to Jack for his kindness. And I also need to reflect on my carelessness.

考查提綱類作文的寫作。提綱類作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達方式的選擇和要點的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。話題是物品不慎丟失而又找回的經(jīng)歷，要點是以提綱的形式表示的，要適當增加細節(jié)，不能只是把要點翻譯成英語、，注意改變文章的樣式。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的。he got me a wonderful watch as my birthday gift, which I had ever since been treasuring all the time before unfortunately I got it lost.這句話用了非限制性定語從句What happened next on this morning, however, almost sent my spirits flying higher than sky. Guess what?這句話是what引導(dǎo)的主語從句，還要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點，使文章成為一個整體。