Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以

下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或

修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(A) ，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\) 劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起) 不計分。

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that Senior Three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am al?lowed to do that,I'll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can't accept her ideas. In my opinion,watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day's hard works. Besides,it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus,we shouldn't be forbidden to watch TV.

Answer 1

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can with watch TV after school. She holds A view that Senior Three the students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard 1ST at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do her that,I'll A unable to control myself and forget all about my be study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can't eyes accept her ideas. In my opinion,watch TV can set my watching mind at rest after a day's hard works. Besides,it is impor 

work tant for us to know what had happened at home and、has abroad. Thus,we shouldn't be forbidden to watch TV.